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This City Will Kill Me, Eventually

Whenever I am hungry
and longing
for a return from
smog and smoke and all these
damned cars

Whenever I can't remember
or can't stand to remember
what trees smell like,
unadulterated by
our bustling

When I get tired with
my laptop
my girlfriend
the television my
trappings and coils

All I need to do
is think towards that
alabaster
athabasca
air

And plunge into an animated
stupor of sweet
reminiscence

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  • davidwright silver member
    May 31, 2008
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    That's a great sentiment. I've felt it many many times myself. Thanks for your entry.

    David Wrigh

  • davidwright silver member
    May 30, 2008

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    The contest is closed for judging which may take two or three days. My thanks to each of you for your entry. Happy trails.

    David Wrigh