The place where my heart was is a empty void.
You hurt me in the most vital place,
and made me empty inside.
I hate you for what you've done to me,
because you've made me dead inside.
You were my port in the storm,
making me happy without fail,
and all of a sudden you are gone.
My days are gray and my nights are long,
I can't stand to look in the mirror,
because my soul is gone.
If you never cared, you shouldn't have said you loved me.
If it was too much, why did you get involved?
I hate you for making this void in my heart,
and I thank you for making me realize
that nobody can truly be trusted.
Author notes
Emptiness
A contest entry
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amazing
this is exactly what i've always wanted to tell someone but never had the guts to. keep rockin the write girl
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This was fantastic I really liked it and thought it worked.I am going to try to write something like that too because I can really relate to this experience. I think I have written similar things in the past, but this gave me lot's of inspiration. It kept my interest all the way through. It was very good I really liked it. It was so powerful andI loved the way you combined feelings. Fantastic work.
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Wow. Did someone break your heart. *grabs a bat* lets go kill'em! Lol love it hun keep it up
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thanks for the vote of confidence!
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I love this one too. Love/hate poems can be so powerful when written right. I love the combination of these three lines "I hate you for what you've done to me, because you've made me dead inside. You were my port in the storm..." Brilliant work.
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