You were my sister,
You were my friend,
I'd start a sentence and you'd always end.
This is torture what you do to me!
Don't you see?
It's your words that make me fall.
Your actions are my chain and ball.
Your icy eyes cut through my heart.
Your spiteful tone tore me apart.
I gave up my happiness for your good.
I guess I thought maybe you understood.
You were my sister you were my friend.
I swore I'd be there for you in the end.
I intend on keeping that promise.
This is torture what you do to me!
Can't you see everything you've done to me?
You used me!
Abused me!
And left me to die!
And yet you wonder why I cry!?!
You spiteful,hateful, little bitch!
You laughed as you threw me in a ditch.
As I fell,
your eyes became stone.
As I yelled out in pain,
Your laughter became insane.
Carefully I closed my eyes,
Out of pain and disdain I wonder why.
How could you!?!
After all I'd done for you!
Today I' swear I'll pray for you.
You may think this is through,
but sweetheart all in all
you just thought
you knew.
Author notes
She used to be my best friend now all she does is stab me in the back.
Let me know how you feel
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i know exactly how you feel. i had a friend do this to me. you did a very good job of this poem.
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Thank you, yeah she was a real Be-otch lol but it just kinda helped me cope with the way she was treating me.
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OMG!!!! i no ive said this to others but that says me & this guy all over it.
Good Job!!!
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Whoa lots of anger is showing through this. I'm glad you're trying to get it out in the poem.
"You spiteful,hateful, little bitch!"
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I am sorry to hear this. Sometimes family doesnt see how they act (I have a huge backstabbing family) I hope that it gets better for you one day. On a good note. Great poetry, Awesome imagery, and great form!
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