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falling.

And so the flowers will continue to bloom,
The wind, it will continue to blow,
Water will flow and yes,
The sun will continue to rise.

So why does it seem,
My world, has it stopped?
My sun,
Will it rise at dawn?

Just because of you are
A part of my life,
That doesn't entitle you
To make me fall in love.

Author notes

Why can't you see how much I love you?
Why can't I be good enough?

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  • Jamie
    May 30, 2008

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    the poem speaks the truth and often starts the debate about whether love is a solution to lifes problems or the cause of far more well done