In a world that often speaks of
Endless possibilities
I seek only to accomplish
Things that truly need to be
For when to overburdened
By daily stress, with which we’re rife
We sometimes are overloaded
By the trials in our life
Yet with each new days arrival
Comes a moment of respite
For the colors paint the world
With a beauty that enlights
A contest entry
- Colored Dreams For Sale.. Get Inspired.. by raspberry.
450 points, ended June 13, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The last stanza just stands out!! Very well done.. looks like the contest is getting tougher to judge
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Thanks raspberry. I really enjoyed writing this! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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That's beautiful. Wish I were awake for that event more often. But there is always the day's departure to watch for.
Good luck in the contest.
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wow... awesome poem!! Great job on this one as well!!! So vivid and full of emotion!!! Good luck in the contest!@!!!
Hugs,
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I think this my friend is one of my favorites!! Maybe I've said that before but oh well...you have so many I love!
"I seek only to accomplish
Things that truly need to be"
"We sometimes are overloaded
By the trials in our life"
I see this all the time!! People who work so much they don't have time for their families...whats the point in that? My sister and her husband work so much to get their girls all the material things they want but they don't give them the most important thing..."their time" atleast I think its the most important.
Loved the message I got from this lovely poem!
good luck in the contest
darlintlc
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BREATH TAKING
for as the colors paint the world
with a beauty that enlights
and if we chose to allow
it can help fade
everyday
trials~
this leaves me feeling so soft and warm inside...niaish for sharing your beautiful thoughts with me
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Oh So Lovely
Well my friend I love your rhyme and flow and I also love the positive content and message of your poem. A wonderful poem with lovely imagery. It was so pleasant to read this morning. 
You take care dear friend.
Bless You,
Sandy
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yes... we can find beauty in little things like a bouquet of balloons ~ a very thoughtful write here. LOVE, prettypoetry.
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Yes! We need to not overburden ourselves... such wisdom in this! Take only what we need and be satisfied with that!
There is indeed beauty there if you look...
Gorgeous write!
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What a lovely poem, Bob. Such wisdom in your words. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Patricia
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