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Mechanical

mechanical brain
run with humanity's hand
spare parts brought to life

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  • PsydewaysTears gold member
    June 3, 2008

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    short but sweet

    makes me think about the dual element of both people and machines, one incorporating the other, and arguably... becoming. i love the last line


  • individuality gold member
    May 29, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry, i like the cold beginning which leads to the warmth of humanity, bright lively smiles.