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Hollow Ichigo ...

Twin towers of onyx gleam by the moon.Two hooded figures_stare and loom.Their weapons appear, one black ,one white.Leaping,ablood_dance in the night.Steal meets steal, sparks fly.wounds wide open,crimson tears cry.One runs on anger, hatered, and spite.Another hungers for thrill of fight.Shreeks of the Battle cry filters the streets.First a glistening red puddle.2nd barely on his feet.adrinalin dies so does his anger.he kneals beside the dead stranger.a prayer said,his sword placed in the ground.Rukia fades.

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  • Bl3achAdDict43v3R
    July 12, 2008
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    awesome


  • BrokenBeyondRepair
    May 29, 2008

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    Hey =]

    i love this ^-^ I think Bleach is awesome XD and i like how you made a write about it. lol i've never seen a poem/write about Bleach ^.^ So i think its cool how you did this.

    "Rukia Fades..." Great ending. =]


    -Aiden