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Insomnia

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I lay here in this big feather bed trying

to sleep but it isn't coming to me again

this night, mind racing in circles with the

thoughts of the nights end, do you hear

me in this world of silence, my breathing

is it to loud, gets up from the bed looking

at the clock next to the bed one am oh

what am I to do? 

 

Wander the house looking at the things 

within my house, eerie looking in the

darkened house, wander through the

kitchen, stopping to get a warm glass

of milk maybe this will help me to sleep,

continues on towards the window in the

den, looking outside into the inky darkness

beyond.

 

Stars are out, twinkling within the darkness

of the sky, the moon like a round ball of

brightness with in the sky reflecting from the

water in my pool, it is a beautiful scene, but

that doesn't help me I am still wide awake,

walks to the television and turns it on sitting

down in front of it hoping this will let me

sleep as it sometimes did.

 

Noises of the night, a dog howling, a cat meowing,

the house settling, the wind whispering in the

night, all relaxing from the familiar sounds of

the night time, even the darkness is not silent but

has the sounds of the crickets and Katie dids chirping

with in its inky darkness, the television talks but I

hear it not, it is talking to the room with in this

silent world of mine.

 

Sleep will not come this night it is now four am and the

dark is becoming lighter as the days dawning begins,

another night with no sleep, another day with the

tiredness that follows my insomnia, tonight is another

time to try for sleep, I wonder how long this will be

going on this insomnia, why me? I ask the air around

me getting no answer, I get up to start the day knowing

that I will not be getting any sleep this time. 

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  • BlackSwan
    June 9, 2008

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    insomnia is horrible and you describe it really well

    good write, I just have a small suggestion that you break it up more rather than leave it in paragraphs because I really had to concentrate on the write

    all in all good job
    -GL in contest


  • LoveDeprived
    May 29, 2008

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    woah this is grand, the imagery here touches me, cause i really suffer from insomnia too, i can so relate to this, i like the start to the end of this write, the flow for me is great, this is really really wonderful, i am honored by this write you have presented to me, cheers to this great write and to you an amazing author.


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    May 29, 2008

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    this is really really good hun,
    i like it so much, really speaks to me,
    my faveourite part is:

    Sleep will not come this night it is now four am and the

    dark is becoming lighter as the days dawning begins,

    another night with no sleep, another day with the

    tiredness that follows my insomnia, tonight is another

    time to try for sleep, I wonder how long this will be

    going on this insomnia, why me? I ask the air around

    me getting no answer, I get up to start the day knowing

    that I will not be getting any sleep this time.

    it really ends it so well,
    all my love,
    kitty

  • aaaaaaaa
    May 29, 2008

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    ahhh totally I can understand this. some people are just night-owls on some nights, and it's so hard to fall asleep. thanks for sharing.