So I ask you, you have but two words
to say to the whole world.
Two words is all you get, to those
yet to come and those we love.
Just two words that will say it all,
to those we may never even meet.
Thats all you get is two,
so I ask you what two would they be.
If you ask me what mine would be
I'd have to say these. Thank you!
A contest entry
- 15/10 PIF (prompt up) by Lady Australis.
800 points, ended June 12, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
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I agree with you but mine would be F OFF just kidding, I agree we should say thank you under all circumstances good and bad for they are what makes us who we are. If someone leaves us "Thank You" if someone does something nice "Thank you" great write..thank you!
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This is good and it makes a person think. I'm thinking what would my two words be. I'd better think a good long while just to make sure my two words measure up to your two. Actually at this point I can't think of any that will.
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Lovely
How lovely it is to think that we could still manage to communicate in the simplest of ways.
"Just two words that will say it all,
to those we may never even meet"
For what is in a "Thank You" resides in the context for sure, universal it is and allways will be like that simple black dress that never goes out of style.
I like it, I like it so!
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this is very cool
and your two words of choice show gratitude and compassion 
your poem has me thinking what my two words would be. i'd like for them to be nice not nasty
good job and good luck
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tks 4 that awsome comment on this poem, hit me back on your 2 , i b tkfl....Don
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this is intesting
i like it
goodluck
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This was a really interesting take on the prompt..
I liked it!!!! I have no idea what my two words would be... Hmm.. going to have to think on it..
Best of luck!!!
Angel
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tks , get back at me on your two , if you plese
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