You sit there and do nothing like things will change themsleves. Well does it look like they are. We have ruined the place we call home. You sit and laugh saying nothings wrong but will you be saying that when our polor caps melt cause the world to flood. You sit and laugh saying nothing is wrong but will you be saying that when our Ozon Layer is gone and we cant even go outside and die of hunger. you sit and laugh say nothing now. I laugh and say is this what you want for the generations behind us. Take responsiblity for what we have done and lets fix it. If we had the money to ruin it we have the money to fix it. This is the only world we have, don't take it for granite one bit. One world, One chance, One home, One way.
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'I.C. Winner'
I wasn't sure if this is what you wanted if not you cant delete from contest
A contest entry
- love or hate by sin.
300 points, ended June 2, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - † Iron Poet † 3 by Penz.
450 points, ended June 5, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
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Congratulations on the silver, I wish you good luck in the contest as well. This is what I wanted, truly persuasive.
But I got lost (somehow) on the 1-paragraph style. Maybe it's just me! Anyway, it's still a good write!
By the way, OZON - should be Ozone. And I do think that global warming is not caused by the ozone layer being damaged. Global warming is caused by greenhouse gases. It stops the excess heat from the earth from escaping. However, you still have a point, we should take care of the Ozone too!
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i am totally in love with this!!!!! ^^ hee hee so far you're my fav...hee hee you're the only so far.... wow tho. awesome!!!!
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im confused on which one to put on there though
i have two that i like alot
but it will only let me put on one
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