Battlefield Of Glory

Sooty face,
lined in gray,
hides stricken dreams
as calvaries die
amongst wings
of seraphim.

A contest entry

15/10 PIF (prompt up) by Lady Australis. 800 points, ended June 12, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Spiritual Battle by Gods Lil Warrior. 330 points, ended September 24, 2008, 34 entries
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Gods Lil Warrior
September 19, 2008

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This is a great poem but I know you can do better for a contest like this one.

You are a great poet.

Good luck in my contest.
- Emberess
  September 22, 2008
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  Oh! Well, actually this isn't the poem I meant to enter. Oops.
RockSteady
June 1, 2008
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COOL
- Emberess
  June 2, 2008
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  Thanx.
Lady Australis
May 29, 2008
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thiscis vwry nice
gioodluck
- Emberess
  May 31, 2008
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  Much thanks.
aaaaaaaa
May 29, 2008

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whoa nice imagery in this one, you really packed a wallop in such a short poem. Thanks for sharing.
- Emberess
  May 31, 2008
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  Thank you.