Sooty face,
lined in gray,
hides stricken dreams
as calvaries die
amongst wings
of seraphim.
A contest entry
- 15/10 PIF (prompt up) by Lady Australis.
800 points, ended June 12, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Spiritual Battle by Gods Lil Warrior.
330 points, ended September 24, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Thoughts, thoughts, thoughts...
Comments
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This is a great poem but I know you can do better for a contest like this one.
You are a great poet.
Good luck in my contest.


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Oh! Well, actually this isn't the poem I meant to enter. Oops.
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COOL
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Thanx.
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thiscis vwry nice
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Much thanks.
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whoa nice imagery in this one, you really packed a wallop in such a short poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you.
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