Mortal wound from galactic spear
adorns Earth’s breast plate.
From his mighty heart
scarlet life scorches with passion
horizons encrusted with gold and jade
as his body trembles in warrior’s wrath.
Soundless siren emerges from within depths,
fragile, melancholic, heart drowned in pressure.
She embraces her god in frigid love
from behind tremoring barriers,
molten by intensity of his spirit,
smiting existence in destructive protection.
Both lovers part, essence brought on tar and granite.
Her tears pearly nymphs, winding nest of serpents
with snaking foamy hairs, covering lusting lips,
his blood erupting novas of fiery bravado,
raw male power bursting, wanting to overcome
limits of matter, achieve passion with salamander tongues
Both forces meet in titanic clash of anguished touches,
he dissolves in her arms, body given freely,
pain and scorn soothed in sapphire womb,
she roars, siren cutting through her vocal cords,
fragile shape of liquid ice, torn and forgotten
One cry,
One sigh,
One good bye
United they rise,
Forged into ether
Author notes
I hope I have met your contest rules and expections and although we have not shared this kind of connection, know that this poem reflects the intensity of what my friendship with you means. Rest asure that you won't be ever forgotten by me. Farewell to a better future.
In a list
A contest entry
- Say Goodbye to Blue Rew with gifts of FIRE~~~WATER by Blue Rew.
4650 points, ended June 6, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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....wow so great!...
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Sweet!!! Well deserving of the spotlight and the gold. Cacading images, language that sings abstract, melancholy, and so full of longing. A perfect coupling of metaphor and imaginative impression. My simple mind can't come up with words complimentary enough for this!
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LOVED the imagery... it completely took me in. I really liked the 3rd and 4th stanzas; those really got me the most. I don't know what else to say... I'm speechless now.
Oh, yeah.. you really earned that gold trophy!
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amazing
i really like this its amazingly colorful and very well put keep it up
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You really captured a lot with this one! I know the feelings in this one that you are speaking of, and you captured it perfectly! There will come a day... Great job!
Congrats on the Gold! Well Deserved for sure!!
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Thank you very much for the great comment. It id dedicated for a special person, who deserves eevry word.
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The intensity of this write is simply incredible...
I for one adore the combination of fire and water,granite and tar....then to be given the gift of being reborn unto each other again in another time...sighs....wow!
This piece really is amazing you have created such wonderful imagery and given such beautiful dedication to one of the most beautiful poets I have ever had the pleasure of allowing into my life...
We are all blessed to have been accepted into such an amazing family....
Beautiful write my dear!
so worthy of gold!
Many blessings to you and your powerful pen.
~A~
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This write encompasses an intensity that I can
only hope my writing will someday...to someone.
Fire and Water become Male and Female as they are
in magic. A visual bonding forged upon this page
that ignites and engulfs all at the same time.
I don't know what to say...
that our friendship could birth this from your
muse gives me so much more than just a gift of words;
it gives me purpose while filling me with lucid joy.
My appreciation can't be expressed well enough...
but I will leave the words thank-you and trust you
to see all the feeling behind them. Blue
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I actually never thought I could write anything for this prompt, but I set my mind that I will make your last moments on AP special and show you just how much your friendshipa nd guidence has affected not only my writing, but my world view as well. So fareweel my darling Cerulian muse, until we ressurect again.
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