Hello, have you woken yet?
Or are you dreaming in your sleep?
Hello, did you forget?
I’m waiting here..
I am waiting here (for you)
Hello, we’re running out of time
On the pay phone at the corner
Hello, miss do you have another dime?
I’m waiting here..
I am waiting here (for you)
I can’t complain, can’t compile
My hearts been set on fire
The clouds are dark, getting darker
Can feel the rain, just a drizzle
Missing you? Only a little..
Hello, why won’t you answer?
Can you hear? Should I speak louder?
Hello, maybe it’s the weather..
I’ll try later, hopefully you’ll be there
I’m waiting here..
I am waiting here (for you)
*click*
This phone call ended.
This hour’s done
Comments
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the incessantness really demands a pace. i like it.
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I like this, although you said, "have you waken yet"
it should be "have you woken yet"
And you said your heart has been "sent on fire" whereas it is generally described as being "set on fire"
Hope you don't mind me pointing these out, its a habit of mine...
I really like this though, its abstract.
Keep writing.
Shelly
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