it's been a whole fucking year.
and i'm still not entirely whole.
he broke pieces of me
i didn't know were breakable.
[and i'm still not sure they're fixable.]
i've put back as many pieces
as i could on my own.
and unless someone can care enough,
i'm sure i'll always be alone.
[even when i'm dead and gone.]
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this poem makes me want to put a bullet through my stupid head.
i really hate myself for writing something like this.
i whine too much.
Please tell me what you think
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this is good. whining makes good poetry sometimes. i don't mind when you whine cuz at least it's creative whining...did that make sense? well...i liked it a lot, even with the obnoxiously yellow background. i hope you get fixed, cuz you don't deserve to be broken.
ily.
<3jules
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AMANDA
this was AMAZING
"he broke pieces of me
i didn't know were breakable.
[and i'm still not sure they're fixable.]"
favorite stanza most deff.
i love you. and i totally hear what your saying. if i didnt have zac to pick me back up after my whole tim fiasco, i'd still be broken too
but dont worry. your beautiful, funny, and talented. someday someone is going to reconize that and fall in love with you. maybe they already have
<3Kate -
Hello
Don't hate yourself for writing! You get the point across, even if it is very simple.
Time will heal. A year may seem long, for now, but once you're good, you'll realize that the pain suffered made you a better person. Be positive!
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