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Meeting Yourself with Hope

How do you find the hope of you, when all knowledge of self is gone?

Who is this person that inhabits my body?

It has no energy to care for family or self.

It has no ability to organize the day.

There are no plans that can be made in advance because you can't follow

through.

Who is this person within me, ravaged by extreme pain?

The medications hiding self behind a wall of haze.

 

Is the self of ego the truest of our soul or is it just a medthod of control?

The path of past and path of future must somehow come to meet.

For here we meet ourselves and what we were meant to Be.

The hope of you lies deep within waiting to connect.

The place that finds our truest self and leaves the past behind.

 

The hope of you is in the present and being in each moment.

The core of self to radiate healing from within out.

A new you to Be; bringing the best this life can offer.

Moving forward with each step and knowing we can create our future.

Thanking the Universe each day with graditude and love in past tense for healing that has occured.

This is the hope we all poccess if we choose to use.

Knowing it is our thoughts welling up from our truest self that heals and gives us the best of life.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Desdmona
    April 17

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    I think this had a lot of pearls of wisdom and good advice and also good questions. However, it wasn't quite my cup of tea. I did like the truth behind it though. Good job and good luck. ~Des

  • Dreamer42morrow
    December 21, 2008

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    "Who is this person within me, ravaged by extreme pain?
    The medications hiding self behind a wall of haze." <<--Great line. This poem, at least to me, really fits how I sometimes feel about life. Great poem!

    Thanks for entering, and good luck in the contest!

    ~Mariah!~

  • Angels Whispers gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    Hi Sky
    Thank you so much for giving me the link to your poem.You have penned this well, there is so much wisdom that you have woven into this.I can realte to your words so much.
    You have been a pleasure to read, and I am definately comming back to read more of you.I have added your name to my favs list because i love the way that you share your heart and voice.
    I send much love and happiness to you.
    Your AP Friendly Angel
    ~Angel-anne~ ( aka Anne)


  • Selfexpressive
    November 29, 2008

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    Hi Sky... I can really relate to this poem and thank you for sharing it... very well wrote aswell... x


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    May 31, 2008
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    Thanks a lot for revising your poem!
    Good luck to you and I appreciate
    your entry here!




    Jeremy0826

  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    May 31, 2008
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    Thanks a lot for entering this contest!
    I think you did a great job with this one.
    However, please review the contest rules.
    I did state that your poem must be atleast
    20 lines long. Please review and edit your
    work and add the word "REVISED" to the title
    of your poem so that I can judge it. Thanks
    a lot and good luck to you here!




    Jeremy0826
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