I know I made that silent promise,
When standing by your graveside,
cursing the tears that had to hide,
as I felt a piece of me leave
No longer is your smiling face
Mine to behold and cherish
No longer will your bright eyes
Light my way in the dark
Oh baby, I don't know how
you can expect me to feel.
nothing is what keeps me whole,
keeps away the uncontrollable pain.
I know I honoured what you asked
But, somehow, it's all over
The memories we made
are now just mine to bear
But baby, my love,
There's no need to worry
- I found love again -
- I found love again -
Author notes
Okay... this is just a draft. I have all these lines running around in my head, but none of it is making any sense at the moment... I dont even know why I've posted this. Probably because I always re-read my posted pieces and tear them to pieces...
What did you think
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i really love this kas, is such a beautiful, tear jerking write.. and i think the fact that it is not completely perfect makes it perfect cos you have such raw emotion in here that you can create a painful atmosphere that really reflects true human emotion, the ending is my fave part its like the ray of sunshine coming out from behind a cloud. great write girl, love you
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