Can you hear the warm breeze in the distance?
It's the music of the summer,
The bloom of the field's flowers.
Wave back to the clouds
And welcome the Holy Sun.
Dismantle the wreath of sadness
But take the hope from it's deepness.
Pack up the burden that bothers you
And sing the song with the doves.
Sweep up all your worries
And smile.
It's summer time!
Life is already here.
What about you?
Author notes
Hello!
I'm back again! Ah I'm really happy for that.
The school is almost over so I will deffinately be visiting you much more often. Until then, here's a little poem about the freedom that waits for us
Best wishes
comments are welcomed
Comments
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"Dismantle the wreath of sadness
But take the hope from it's deepness."
Terrific stanza here, I loved this poem in its entirety; but these two lines could be a poem alone. Very well written.
Silvos.
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Hey sis
Sweep up all your worries
And smile.
It's summer time!
Life is already here.
What about you?
Alsome poem sis u did a beautiful job with this i enjoyed reading it and Loved the way it was formed great work with this poem keep da ink flowin
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wow! this was really good! >.< The metaphors you used gave me a warm and comforting feeling! Very soothing... and lovely! Great job with the last line! keep penning yea?
~RANJI
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I'm glad you're back.
I was wondering where you went :]
I'm always glad to read your pieces.
:]
♥
~Princess of Shadows~
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