Unspoken words…
Yet etched within my heart.
The silence speaks.
But isn't spoken.
How can you know the silence
Of my words to speak and tell you all.
Will be lost and not be told.
So many times…
My heart has spoken.
The words of Love.
In each moment that
Beats within my heart in life…
Not spoken yet all
Contained within this heart…
A contest entry
- Bring your best PW (5 to 50 words) QUICKY by Meroza.
700 points, ended April 1, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really do like the start, but the ending is a road kill. Sorry to be harsh, but it kinda drags the whole thing down. But remember, I do like the start very much
Good luck
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This is amazing, it doens't seem awkward at all, it almost seems like it could sprout wings and futter off of the page...
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this is really good huni,
i like it so much, this is really really thought-provoking, very deep and insightful,
my favourite part was:
How can you know the silence
Of my words to speak and tell you all.
Will be lost and not be told.
all my love,
kitty xxx -
Great job, I had to reread it. Soft and delecat.
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Wow.
I'm not really sure where to go with this because it's so soft & emotional. Absolutely amazing what comes out of that mind of yours! Good luck in the contest.
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This was so wonderful!! I really loved this hun.. You did such a wonderful job.. Your emotions show through so well.. I wish you the best of luck..
Angel
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