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Flaming Despair





I waited so long
in the torrential rain.
Sheets and sheets
of silence
soaking my heart in shame.


Tears helt and swell upon my face outlining heartbroken truth...


You took my love for granted
left it beyond repair.
I promise you will pay for this,
for my flaming despair.







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Prompt: Ashen Teardrops

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  • Lady Australis silver member
    May 29, 2008
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    this is so beautiful
    thankyou for ebtering


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    May 29, 2008

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    oooh you should win with this poem huni,
    i love it so much, i mean its so emotional,
    and once again you made a beautiful poem,
    and such a beautitful poetess too,
    my favourite part is this:


    Tears helt and swell upon my face outlining heartbroken truth...

    it just struck me like lightning
    all my love,
    kitty


  • Angelflower
    May 29, 2008

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    This was such a wonderful take on the prompt..
    The emotions in your words are just so heartfelt,
    they created a very vivid and sorrowful image..
    I enjoyed this very much..
    Thank you for sharing!!!..
    I wish you the best of luck..

    Angel