Breaking away,as the shadows close in,
Singing a lulling tone,my soul sleeps as
These whispering tears fall..
Into this caveren of sorrowful love,
Singing of withered hearts,Broken ashes fall
From this beauty,that many don't see the true shattered
Face that hides in terror....
In the ashes that tell the hell that lives within my mind,
Fall in this last tear of my disappearing
Soul....
Author notes
the prompt: ashen teardrops
15 peaple
10 lines
gold winner play it forard
In a list
A contest entry
- 15/10 PIF (prompt up) by Lady Australis.
800 points, ended June 12, 2008, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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ditto again...
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very good take on the prompt, and well this is amazing,
you should score well babe, the picture goes so well with it too
all my love
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Oh Guardian... this is great.
I wish you luck!
~Kystal Angel
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beautiful. absolutely beautiful
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Thank you.. I'm glad that you liked it..
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How wonderfully beautiful in sadness...broken hearts are often never mended and some take a life time...wonderfully written in flow and depth...A pleasure to read, as always...
Best,
mystic
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Thank you very much... I'm glad that you liked this.. I've had writers block for a while.. I guess my muse came back..
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Another sad write that mirrors my mind!!
Wonderful write sis.. good luck in the contest!
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Wow! This is beautiful. So very sad. A broken heart layed out in front of us, trying to repair itself, but losing it's own battle. Wonderful job, good luck in the contest.
♥~~Shannon~~
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I think you may be getting crowned "Queen of the Picture Prompts" lol. Everytime I read one of your prompt inspired pomes, I'm left amazed at your skill x Loved it hun x
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Lol.. I'm glad that you did love it.. I was a little lost with this one..Lol.
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Well it certainly doesn't show x
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this was amazing
i love it
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amazing!!! BEAUTIFUL imagery!!!!
love it -
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Thank you very much.. I'm very glad that you liked it.
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lovey picture
thankyou for entering
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