that she stop hating God
for what she thinks He is and
blaming Him for all her losses
and tragic family circumstances.
I pray that she learn who He really is,
and that she is loved by Him...
He loves all He has created,
and it's truly His to take and give.
A miracle is what she needs;
she's shut herself off
from any means of reasoning.
She's in the blaming and hating
stage of the grieving process,
and coming from a broken
family life hasn't helped any.
God help lost souls as her.
God prove that He has miracles
for such as she and I...
To keep me from despairing, too.
Author notes
6. "People killin', people dyin'
Children hurt and you hear them cryin'
Can you practice what you preach
And would you turn the other cheek
Father, Father, Father help us
Send some guidance from above
'Cause people got me, got me questionin'
Where is the love" - from "Where Is The Love?" by Black Eyed Peas (feat. Justin Timberlake)
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Comments
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Your friend is lucky!
I hear god can be such a great
influence on people.
You portrayed this very well.
I wish you well in all of your
contests.
-Emily.

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I really like this! Miracles need to happen on a regular basis, and the idea of changing our heart is wonderful! Nicely done!


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I love it... Your friend is luck to have your suport in her time of need..


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Love it!


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Very religous poem. I like the flow.
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awwwwwwwww yes
So many blame God for everything and do not know the loving God I know. The one who cares deeply and loves unconditionally. Good write and good prayer my friend, God bless you, Mark

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Hope your prayer is answered. I've doubted God myself and been angry with him, and - it seems like it should be obvious - but it can be hard to get yourself to see that it's not GOD that is responsible for all the evil in the world.
People never want someone to rule their life entirely, yet they're quick to "wish" that God would solve all their problems and make everything perfect for them. -
beautiful plea!
she is lucky to have you!
could be the answer to your prayers.
very lovely again my friend.
God bless...











