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Is This What Is Called A Bad Hair Day?

The words?
Dang, what were they?
Open something ...
ah, life sucks at times.
All dressed up and
for the life of me...
And, to top this,
its beginning to rain.

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Girl at gate...is the prompt with pic

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  • individuality gold member
    May 29, 2008

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    a good piece, ah it is always wise to carry a brolly with you wherever you go and whatever weather, i have one for sale, just eighteen ninety nine (thousand) lol


    • 2lullabyhaven
      May 29, 2008
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      That's a brolly hahaha that must also double as some mo stuff hahaha for sure lol
      I am taking it that a brolly is equivalent to an umbrella over here? right?


  • Mat Larkin
    May 29, 2008
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    15 minutes later...

    and I am still laughing. Thanks so much...

    he he he...

    I know this is the Gold..

    Mat

  • Mat Larkin
    May 29, 2008

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    hysterical...

    very funny take on the prompt...oh my god! And here I am with my serious shyte... I need a beer..

    Still laughing,

    Mat

    • 2lullabyhaven
      May 29, 2008
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      you are so cute hahahaa but thanks, you made me feel better with this hahaha 'cause I just couldn't think of it another way, as the prompt demands hahaha oh to be more like you hahaha I have to go missing the whole darn target as per usual lol really, though, thanks a lot for your humor and review lol


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 29, 2008

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    lol.. forgotten the password to get in the gate hey!! Darn rain too.. isn't that just typical!! Cute write!


    • 2lullabyhaven
      May 29, 2008
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      hahaaha thanks, sorry I went funny with it hahaha I just stepped in it hahaha

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