Anything at all my love,
for you, my sweetest muse,
my soul provider,
my spring in winter,
all things that are true.
Anything at all my love,
no matter the price to pay,
no feathered pillow or
sheltered nest compares
to this love we grew.
Anything at all my love,
this I promise now,
eternally my heart is yours:
to leave would be my death,
I won't do that to me and you.
(c) Debby Sorensen Carlson
5/29/0878
A contest entry
- Quote to Stir the Muse! by Cannonsfire.
1750 points, ended June 14, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So.. what do you all say folks.. is it compare or compares ? LOl.
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Compares...
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mtpoet
Thank you !!! God bless. Debby
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Very beautiful writing here. Tells of a love that is very very strong. A love that you would go through anything for. Keep writing. You are very good.
With
Dark
Love
Wayne Leon
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Wayne Leon
Thank you Wayne.. ! Be blessed..d
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This is truly beautiful when it's love from the heart of one to another this is very well written and I thank you for the priviledge of it being shared with me. Good luck in the contest and God Bless...
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darryl
Thank you so much my friend ! Blessings. d
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I LOVE THIS I had to read it three times I love the end when it says "Anything at all my love, this I promise now, eternally my heart is yours" speaking from one person in love to another I have no critism for this poem
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Kleroo
Thank you ! I am so glad you enjoyed this piece.
Blessings. d
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the first verse you write my muse something ... thats strange it relates so much to me... in the sense that i have fairly new girl friend and my writing has got better- did you mean this? anywho this was well writing and i enjoyed it
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Uniquely-Scarred
Yes.. it is what I meant. People we love open us up, inspire us.. Thank you very much for reading and commenting. It is so appreciated. Blessings. d
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to give our all is all we can ever do, it shows our intent as to whether we are good or bad in life, if we are an open book then there can be mo mistakes. a good poem showing love.
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individuality
Thank you so much.
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Lovely, this is quite a lovely and loving poem. I like how the metaphor of the feathered pillow is used to show something considered expressive to be not at all to expansive for them. "Only the finest wine for the beloved" Something like that was what I felt when reading it.
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Zanerus
Thank you so much for your thoughtful and lovely comments. Blessings. Debby
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Truer words were never spoken!
I'd say compares instead of compare, but that might just be a stylistic thing. -
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Aerden
I went back and forth on the compare/compares. LOL.. thanks for the comment and the help. Blessings.d
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Oh that is so lovely, thank you for your entry Love, C
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Thank you C -
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