Weeping winds blow...
Trembling hands reach for
the home of the lost...
Soul cries, the past's
of a forgotten child clinging.....
Home is not where the heart is..
{hell incarnate..}
Author notes
http://kayceeus.deviantart.com/art/Girl-at-Gate-81359466
10 poets
20-30 words
30 minutes
In a list
A contest entry
- Anyone up for a quickie? I promise not to make it too hard lol by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 29, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow
I can definitely see why you have trophies, "trembling hands reach for for the home of the lost..." Amazing stuff -
Again I totally agree with everyone, its amazingly good hun. Why the hell do you think you're not very good?? Congrats on the trophy x
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this is amazeing flower angel
i love you -
this is really really good hun,
i acually managed to write something btw,
this is beautiful btw, very deep,
all my love,
kitty -
OH WOW!!!! This was an excellent take on the picture!! I love your word choice!!! Brilliantly done, full of darkness and dripping with sadness....Best wishes
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This is a very impressive take on the prompt. I loved the flow and imagery whittled in the darkness of emotion. the word choices were superb. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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Holy Shit! This is greatly dark....not scary though and I appreicate that! LOL....A great poem penned.
I wish you luck! 
~Kystal Angel
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Aww.. that's so sad!!! sometime home isn't where the heart is for sure!! Excellent write
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