I was in love for the first time..
with the person who never loved me,
he would never understand what I felt for him
Just a hi and a bye everyday
were his words for me
But I had almost completed a book for him
deep inside my heart
I thought he'l realise it today
I thought he'll realise tomorrow
But never did he realise
how much I loved him
and then he came to me one day
and told that he was in love
with the girl he had met a day ago
He broke my heart
but yet all I did was smile
and a month ago he came to me
with a broken heart
saying that the girl did not love him
he told now that he loved me
And all I could give him was
A tight Slap!!
A contest entry
- Give Me Love...With a Twist by Hidden.
480 points, ended June 7, 2008, 38 entries
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love is hard sought and fought.
when we love another, there is a 50/50% chance that the other isn't even on the same plane of our existence. it's cruel and demanding but you're young. embrace the things you shared and know that the universe has a way with working things out.
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Ahh I love how it ended. He deserved that and more, trying to use the girl as a rebound. Great write!
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something a lot of people can understand. great write with raw emotions...
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hey.. this was just a fiction kind of a poem written for a contest. It was not me in here..
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Uh oh..one tight slap..
with time comes the season and reason..of change..
Your emotions are direct and fully raw on the poem..
thanks for sharing
-autumn
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Spare me for this poem.. I havent written any for almost a year..
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