Standing at Cemeteries door,
I plead to unknown voices.
"Let them come back!
Let them come back!"
To no avail, my voice breaks.
Momma and Poppa promised,
we'd go together.....
Author notes
Credit Artist:
http://kayceeus.deviantart.com/art/Girl-at-Gate-81359466
30 words
Wow...The title accually works!
A contest entry
- Anyone up for a quickie? I promise not to make it too hard lol by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 29, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
1 - 8 of 8
-
Omg!
WOW! AMAZING write! I love the metaphor and flow. It gave the poem that extra "umph" or boost that it needed. It matches the pic perfectly! Thanks for sharing this magnificant piece with me!
+ Jackie -
very good...
another fine entry into an interesting little contest. I enjoy your dark take on the prompt..
-
aw wow deep..made me feel sad, so it has thta effect
well done Kystal, hope you do well and many thanks for your comment again
Cindy
-
Oh my gosh!! That's so sad!!!! And just right for the pic!!
Wonderful
-
oh my! Such a sad darkness lingering over this masterfully penned writ. The emotion in this piece linger far beyond the words. Beautifully penned. An enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
-
Oh that is so sad!!! An amazing take on the image prompt here. Great depth. Truly a touching write! Best wishes in the contest!
-
Aww this is so sad! Amazing write though i love it!!!!!! xxx
-
Oh geesh!!!! Now I am crying and I had promised myself i would NOT cry for just once!!!! This was more than incredible...... You broke my heart!!
Adding your comment:
1 - 8 of 8
