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I Love You

Noela:
One day she thought she could tell him.
Tell the guy she loved how she feels.
One day that she was confident, and knew that
it was real.

They had been friends forever.
They were only friends till now.
She knew that she loved him,
and she had to tell him somehow.

The boy(Jeremy):
This is the day he would tell her,
Tell Noela how he feels.
He was feeling very confident, and
knew that this was real.

They had been friends forever,
He trusted her most of all.
This is they day he would tell her,
It was destiny that seemed to call.

Together:
Jeremy I need to talk to you.
Theres something that needs to be said...

Noela I need to talk to you too.
In you I always depend...

Jeremy, We've been the best of friends,
and we will be till the end...

Noela, I know, and I need your advice,
Because Im in love with your friend.

Noela seemed to crumble, as the words left Jeremy's mouth.
She never expected something like this,
but reality she'd never doubt.

Jeremy watched Noela, her smile began to sink.
Had he said something wrong?
He didn't know what to think.

We all know that it's not easy,
upon the road of one sided love.
Loving someone who dosent love you back
can be fucking rough.

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  • a humble servant
    May 29, 2008

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    awww....thats such a sad poem, but its so beautiful. You've interweaved the two conversation very well. It feels very polished. I hope you win!


  • Hidden
    May 28, 2008

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    great poem, i really love it. i could feel my heart drop to the floor like Noela's when he sid those ords. wonderful.