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The Dizu Fish

Within the ocean there lives a fish
and it's no ordinary, common fish
It has two eyes not evenly spaced
which hang slightly crooked off of it's face
it's stare is uneven, just like it's nose
one eye goes straight while the other....who knows?!
An expression of confusion haunts the things mouth
while a turd always hangs from where it came out
it swims in a circle from handicapped fins
and when it smiles has a hillbilly grin
predators watch it with a curious eye
but the things probably toxic so they pass it on by
and while eating it raw makes your stomach churn
we know not to cook it or else it will burn

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  • DarkLordShadow
    October 23, 2008
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    Great Poem

    Another Great Poem from Natelyst. I'm a big fan of yours.

  • GodsForsakenSon
    August 10, 2008
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    I like this poem, which it is rare that i appriciate something.


  • XpushXmeXagainX
    May 29, 2008
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    I think it describes her perfectly. =]


  • judy011
    May 29, 2008
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    haha :)

    haha very funny poem good write man heep it up


  • Duchess Dizufish
    May 28, 2008
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    nate ! : O


    i will exact my revenge for this. oh, you just wait. >: D

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