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my spirit wolf guide

Wolf
Come to me
Share your wisdom
Hear my plee
You came before
You saved me
You helped me through
I love you
You are my savior
You are my guide
If it weren't for you
I would be dead inside

You are my spirit wolf guide

Author notes

woot! i love writing about my spirit guides!

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  • celticwarrior
    June 11, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry. Stylistically, your poem is a rapid, simple rhyme. Thematically, you are praising your animal spirit, whom you call a "savior", without really
    describing anything about its powerful presence or message for you.

    Thank you again for your creative entry.


  • Thoughts-of-Soloman
    June 10, 2008
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    Yes- BE such a wolf!


  • Gwenevere
    May 29, 2008
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    The wolf is a strong and loyal spirit.Long may you feel her prescence, Ros