By the highway,
flowers laid, bundled
from hands purposely
to stay together,
unlike skid marks...
Whereas a living maiden
with the pink ability
to be peachy-looking
lost it in ignored privileges
of speed.
Thundering tears
modify these petals
to shine,
dripping in alive grief.
Your sunned sense of cope
is shadowed easily
by the precipitous mountains,
carrying rocks without a seat belt
that vises
with a textured filament strap,
mirroring the miata.
These plants are tinted differently,
even if most gorgeous
will they not make you sing.
In a list
A contest entry
- Another Picture Inspirational by Kelli Marie.
3000 points, ended May 29, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I finally could write about a tragic car accident event.
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Excellent!!!!!!!
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"with the pink ability
to be peachy-looking" seemed kind of random to me, it didn't really fit the rest of the poem. Other than that I liked it.
You don't have to change anything if you like it the way it is, though. Remember that it's your write, not mine. -
Holy cow, this is stunning and so well penned. I am a little teary eyed because I have been in this situation.
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Very true
Dear Daisy,
There are so many accidents that can be avoided, and if an accident occurs more people could be saved, if only they wore their seatbelts. In the city I am from there are many highway markers at a tragic accident site.
You have written a very heartfelt and soulful poem that many could learn from. Thank you for sharing.
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Though you used your own picture, and I connect it automatically to your picture, I can still connect it to the connest picture as well. Thank you for sharing. A nicely written piece of poetry.
Kelli
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