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I'd Do Anything For You (That's Why It's Over)


God help my soul
It's strayed so far from home
Your eyes intoxicate me
Like a strong shot of alcohol
I'm lost inside the wonder
You've blinded me
I've blinded me
I'd do anything for you
That's why it's over
That's why I can't see you anymore
I really meant "I love you"
But this relationship is all wrong

My morality is gone
I'm doing things I never thought I would
You mean so much to me
That's why I'm telling you now
Before it's too late
God will find each of us
Someone else
But you and I are over
I pray that you will see what I see
And this story will be like a fairy tale
But I'm doubting that will happen
But to be honest
I'm praying that it will

 

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  • movedon
    July 25, 2008

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    Love can hurt....it can hella hurt. But it's once you reach that emphiany of "you are the one" I think it's different. Love falls apart not when you reach that stage, but when you THINK you hit it and you haven't.

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • Mistress Masquerade
    May 28, 2008

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    People tend to forget that even though love is supposedly so fabulous it can hurt you more than anything else, this poem does a ggreat job showing both sides. Its very bittersweet and I love that. Best of luck!


  • Cannonsfire
    May 28, 2008

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    Reads just like the lyrics of a song but oh so sad...funny how love stirs the sadness before the happy parts. Love, C


  • BehindTheShadow
    May 28, 2008
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    This reminds me of a line in a new song I like, I am better off a memory than your man. Great job!