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The Clean Room

My mind
    dwells in deep
                thickening waters

as it fills my insides
                with concrete
                        and stones

My head swirls
      with flocks of birds
                migrating in circles

as I try
      to drown out
              the screaming silence

Author notes

Ok, a little idea of whats going on..."The Clean Room" is actually what we call the IV room. At work I mix intravenous admixtures for patients and nurses. Lately I have been stuck inside the IV room (aka the Clean Room) for months, practically by myself. and everyone knows, at work, what happens when you are stuck in there day in and day out. Your mind starts stirring and you almost go completely CRAZY. and i am starting to feel it now. so had to write about it.

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  • Ennigma
    May 29

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    woa

    this how how i think i would feel too!!..You need a vacation Catie!!! lol again..very good write, you are very good with your imagery

  • Amazing!

    I had no idea that what you've just described, was happening in hospitals... it's strange... and it's a shame that you cannot listen to music or take a walk down to the staff cafeteria for a quick get-away or a break from the depressing reality of your awful job. Geeze... Well anyway, it's a great write, with good flow. Thank you for sharing your world with all of us, and all the best to you!!! Take care, Cyn

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  • Wonderful write..
    I adore the imagery of this even if your alone in a room ...
    I would rather think of it as a blessing....in silence your thoughts are all of your own , they come much more freely ...smiles

    Over all a fantastic write.
    Many blessings to you in your little room...
    ~A~

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