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Soft touch.

 

  

             Hands trembling,

                         I reach

           towards my prize.


                        Tingling,

        I devour every inch.


Carressing your body,

I feel my youth come rushing back.

 

            And im free.

Author notes

Pic prompt. 25 words.
Credit to: http://esjot.deviantart.com/art/touch-me-71339068

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  • The Drifter
    August 12, 2008
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    Soft Touch

    I like it--I wish I could convey emotions as quickly as you.

  • Liquid memories
    May 31, 2008
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    well, well, nicely done with total release. Congrats on the award. This was deserving.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 28, 2008

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    Ohhhh.. tantalizing... and sensual subtly that is divine sis!!

    pffttt... you can't write bollocks if you tried

    This is fabu!!!


  • SuicidalLover
    May 28, 2008

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    Congrats on your bronze sis! A great write!


  • Nothing But No
    May 28, 2008

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    Truly amazing, well written and it took in all the feeling of the prompt. Best of luck in the contest

  • SuicidalLover
    May 28, 2008
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    Wow...sis just wow. I know this feeling. You penned my secrets and unwanted thoughts so well! (get outta my head!) I jokes. I wish you luck!
    ~Kystal Angel


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    May 28, 2008
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    wonderfully written!
    good luck

    Tasha


  • crimsondew
    May 28, 2008
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    Well written...emotions built up well.All the best!

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