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Barter of love

Drip.
Drip.
Dripping from God's hand
quenching, pleasing
it fills my throat.
Barter of love.

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  • adsaige
    July 8, 2008

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    i liked the third line best. i think this should be edited to get the awkward kinks out. thank you for your entry.


  • pancake
    July 7, 2008
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    Wow. Really interesting. Very powerful and strong.


  • Fiona Hollywood
    June 18, 2008
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    Wow... Kind of distrubing... but in a very beautiful way