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Uncontrollable

Cascades of heat
soars over ones flesh,
Heights of pleasure
and desire escalating.
Through strength of your touches
passion boils,
nails dig.
Body quivers...
uncontrollably.

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pic prompt 20 -25 words


this was 25 words.

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  • Soulful Woman silver member
    May 29, 2008

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    WOW.. didnt even need my glasses to read this one..lol
    You really used 25 words to make your statement stand out. Great job.
    Soulful Woman


  • cricketjeff gold member
    May 29, 2008
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    Hot flashes!
    Good stuff in 25 words, as we all expect


  • KayJay
    May 28, 2008
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    Steamy and hot... perfect for the prompt!
    Ken


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    May 28, 2008

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    oooooh steamy quivering ! lol
    nice! good luck

    Tasha


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 28, 2008
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    Bravo V~


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 28, 2008

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    All The Best!



    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~

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