My fingers touch
where your kisses
played.
Involuntarily, my
hand lowers to the
waiting heat that
those thoughts ignites.
Liquidly, I find
a memory renewed.
Author notes
25 words
Prompt: Picture and Touch
Picture Credit: http://esjot.deviantart.com/art/touch-me-71339068
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie 10-20/25-30 by Poetic Tasha.
700 points, ended May 28, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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Love it
Leaves much to the imagination, soft yet precise. Keep writing, great poetry. 9/10 -
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Appreciate the kind words... hope it warmed up your morning (LOL).
Ken
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Oh, that really does have some wonderful images dancing through it. Gave me a powerful start, that one did.
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Thank you for the comment and the reaction
... guess I did something right 
Ken
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Gold....liquid
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Ohhh well.. gulp.. my my you are definitely conjuring up a lot of sexy wee writes lately! Love this!
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A very intriguing piece of thought penned here. Nicely done! I think 'ignites' would read better as ignite. Overall - a great take on the image!!! Congrats on the gold!
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really loved this,me thinks you've read too much of my recent work
hehe
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Sorry, I'm just laughing at the below comment, lol.
Very sexy write, great take on the pic. (You should try and left align some of your non-rhyming pieces).
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mmmmm i can relate!
well done
Tasha
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