Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

I Wish

I wish you was here
Wishing I was there
Oh how I wish they saw how we care
Wish upon a star
I wish for you to have a new car
Wish that the war ends
I wish for all the latest trends
The one wish that has came true
Was the wish to know an angel like you!
I wish for harmony and peace
Wish to have my own space please
I wish to see my loved ones who have passed
To see their faces would be a blast
I wish with a penny and a fountain
Really wish I could ski and climb a mountain
Wish on a full moon
That I could go into a lagoon.
I wish you could see my love
I wish I saw a dove
The one thing I wished for and do see
Is the angel I know in front of me!
I can wish and wish again and again
I wish I had you as a friend
Now this is my last wish
For it’s on my life long list.
I hope that you enjoyed this poem
One day I wish it'll be put in chrome!!!!!!

A contest entry

What do you think?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 7 of 7

  • libithina
    November 11, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I did ! I did ! truly enjoy, so now may your wishes be granted in abundance

    Your friend with

    Lib x x x s


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 27, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Thank you for this wonderful entry.
    I appreciate it and wish you all the best
    in my contest!




    Jeremy0826


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    October 27, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Sweet and endearing!

    I loved the precious innocence of your poem. It is a loving tribute to all. This is truly appreciated!

    Karen


  • tawk gold member
    October 27, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Beautiful tribute, I so enjoyed reading. Hugs Theresa


  • Lionsloves Lair
    June 8, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Group appreciation!

    Thank you for this beautiful contribution to the Lionsloves Lair reading list

    Reads with good flow and imagination, engaging and expressive...

    Love and smiles
    ~Lilac


  • The Girl In ME
    June 8, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL POOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEM.


  • StarEyes
    June 8, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    I wish... those two words, in the repition of this poem, makes me wish I could have one more day, with the one I dream of, and wish that I did not lose like I did.

    This is great! Makes one stop and think! Great job on this one!

    Thanks for posting this in the Lionsloves Lair, or I would have missed it!

1 - 7 of 7