Excruciating memoirs,
resurface forgotten havens,
where the rift remains,
past the path of speech.
Shattering beauty’s inspiration,
from mercy’s undeniable wail.
Aiding her embedded qualms,
that destroys dramatic dreams,
while the mind reels in heartache.
Author notes
20-60 words
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Here's the link: http://slshimerdla.deviantart.com/art/Shattered-9021139
A contest entry
- PIF Prompt Inspiration by xCandieKissesx.
600 points, ended May 29, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please critique my work if you feel this needs improving
Comments
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Love the take on this and the powerful flow throughout.
All the best
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Wow this was such a brilliant take on the prompt. Deeply powerful and lovely imagery expressed! Good luck in the contest
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Great take on the prompt!
I like the imagery and metaphor you used! It was really compelling and grasping!
Good luck!
+ Jackie
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