Into a future fractured,
alone standing here now
one will gaze
in reflection and find
dreams undone
by words spoken.
Author notes
credit to the artist of pic Shattered by *slshimerdla
A contest entry
- PIF Prompt Inspiration by xCandieKissesx.
600 points, ended May 29, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderful
Very creative take on the picture. Congratulations on the honorable mention.
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Thank you so much for reading my mumbling thoughts as I wonder the path of life
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This was such a beautiful take on the prompt. Pure emotions and deep notions expressed. Lovely imagery as well. Good luck in the contest
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WOW! So breathtaking and beautifully written!
I love the imagery and metaphor used in this piece!
It really captured the true meaning of the pic!
Great take on the prompt!
Good luck!
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Thank you so much for reading and your comment...just got in from work and it was all I could think of at this time.
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