So many times
I have drowned
Sunk underneath
Completely gone
Now I had someone there
Who finally pulled me out
Gave me a towel
You even dried me off
Never felt so good
Never felt so great
Never want to let go
Forever and ever
I’m so happy for once
Hoping it’ll never end
But deep down
My mind is telling me no
So what do I say
I say yes, and forget
Logic had once been a friend
Cause I’m just so happy
Just with you…
A contest entry
- Inspiration from the GROUP, "We Are Losers and We Know it." by Perception.
750 points, ended July 7, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Like my happy poem?
Comments
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It's nice. Simple and nice
I get the feeling that you're kinda wary of this happpiness at first but it takes you over in the end 
Good job!
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Deep.
I agree, it's well written. I can relate to this. Once, everything turns dark, and then someone shines the light on the subject and suddenly, it's not dark anymore. Love and happiness run deeper than water; you can't just listen to yourself think, you have to think positive of the negitive things and if you've never been any happier with anyone else, then don't push it to turn out the way your mind tells you.
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this is well written and i can remember being in that exact position so many times. logic and reason screamed one thing but simple emotion said the opposite. its a powerful thing to write about and i think you capture it well
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