Your cologne still caresses
my sheets
Your taste tantalizing
on my tongue
Fingers explore
my fleshly fire
...as I slide out of my
second skin
Author notes
Prompt: Pic, 20-25 words
Artist Credit:
http://ammanda.deviantart.com/art/Sexy-60023036
A contest entry
- Adult PIF quickie by Poetic Tasha.
700 points, ended May 28, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This works.
Wheeeew.
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woot!
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Wow....how do you do these sensual writes with so few words...truly amazing. This was penned to perfection, kissed by your creative flair. Grats on another well deserved silver!
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Oh, now my heart is really racing! You certainly do know how to get the message across.
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Excellent
Another incredible creation. Such a powerful choice of words. Congratulations on the silver.
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I have dreams like this and they are good dreams....Great write
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you super sexy female, you---you are really something
Joe
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AWESOME! I am sure that many of us can relate to this one 
Fantastic write! Congrats on the silver! ♥
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oh oh oh , lovely heheh
sensual, not to over the top, perfect SiS
Congrat's on the silver
Cin
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well ahem! that second skin you sliding out of brings to light the first skin and truthfully the first skin glistens so much better in so few words you left an impression now that takes talent well done and congrats on the silver
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Wow... another gem, Jacks. This was hot, without a doubt, and did not disappoint. I admire the powerful use of language but also how you made "self help" still appear quite intimate and sensual... more than just physical pleasure. There was a connection to the partner even with the partner absent... very cool job making this into something meaningful and doing it so artistically.
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lol.. you seem to only read my sensual writes Mark.. hmm..
Kidding!
Glad you liked it!
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Round two? A truly enjoyable read here! Short and sweet!
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Well hehe
This is a very nice piece from you congrats on Silver should of won gold though lol
Be well
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Congrats on the silver!
Wow a very saucy poem...love how it melts together. Superbly penned hunni...adore this! Congrats on the silver
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GOODNESS!
UH UMMM..WHEW! my mind was pure and clean of 'dirty' thoughts til I read this! Thanks to you I need to take a 'cold one' now! l.o.l. J.K.! great write as always!
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hehe.. thanks hun...
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I understand why this is in a list called 'Sensual'.
anyone?!!
"fleshly fire" and "second skin"--both some alliterative and good phrases and also highly appropriate for the poem, you devil. LoL, kudos on the Silver!
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Shoot! I should have marked this adult
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congreats on silver auntie!
i love you so much
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WOW you are on a roll with the sensual writes!!! This one left me breathless.. amazing job sis.. this was one SEXY write hehe.. congrats on silver
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The pic is enough to set ablaze, let alone your beautiful second skin. heh I see senses all over! weeeeeeee!
Congrats on the silver .. twas truly loverly!
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very sensual, great take on the pic. Love the title! Congrats on the silver.
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Excellent
Delightfully sensual
Few words that paint a vivid picture
Brilliant piece you have penned
Congrads on the Silver
Well deserved
Take care
David
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Beautifully sensual. Congrats on well deserved silver.
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congrats on silver...!
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whit wooooo.
Very sensual. Bravo my dear! xxx
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Sensual
Beautiful write my friend You create a wonderful vision with your sensual words
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OHHH LA LA.....I love the imagery your poem expresses...Your prose is as sexy as the image...
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Well, there go my dreams tonight (LOL)... Wildly sensual within the bounds of good taste (pun intended!)
Ken
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OOOOH! Now this is just brilliant! Love the sensual depths, and such poignant and well spoken imagery here. Excellent write!
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mmmmm hot & sexy! love it
good luck
Tasha
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ooooooooooooooo and what shall she do..... but handle things on her own.... thanks for sharing and good luck in contest.... great minds think alike...!
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Holy Hell on Fire!!! Damn sis...I take it you've done this before...
This great sis. Talk about sexy! I wish you luck!
~Kystal Angel
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that picture is hot! anyways...focus...this was a very nicely penned sensual poem. the mood, the motions - everything lifted off the page in this one
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Thanks! Not my best I'm afriad.. I had 10 people messaging me as I was trying to write
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Do what I do write off line then copy. well done
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hehehe... good idea
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