I’m so ugly
I scare myself
I don’t like to look in the mirror
All I see is shattered inside of me
From that day the pain will always remain
You punched me in the face and knocked
out my teeth
I would rather die
Then sit in front of this mirror and cry
Author notes
photo prompt: http://slshimerdla.deviantart.com/art/Shattered-9021139
20-60 words
(wrote only for the contest)
A contest entry
- PIF Prompt Inspiration by xCandieKissesx.
600 points, ended May 29, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow. this was very emotional. it was an amazing poem. great job.
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Wow,
A very emotional charged piece here you weave within your poetry.. A sad piece indeed, and congrates on the HM in the contest. Thanks for sharing, and pen on poetess!
-Timothy
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Powerfull and effective, devinately captures the feeling of the picture
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The emotion comes through with each word and pain is so vivid. Well penned. All the best
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Aww such a deeply emotionl poem.. I can feel the pain from your words, deep inside. Great take on the prompt & good luck in the contest
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Wow, from the picture to your words. Another amazing write, the emotion is so strong. Best of luck!! All I can say is wow.
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so sad and emotional. ya know, you really are beautiful. if this is how you feel, i pray that you can see past your blemishes. great write though
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Ah, cool twist at the end.
I see you've taken the pic and added your own flare to it. I like that!
Nice take on the prompt!
Good luck!
+ Jackie -
Good write, I like the short couplet at the end. Emotional. Good luck in the contest!
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depressing! omg awww
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