Distasteful--
A spoken curse shattered itself--
Horrified--
Cracks along a glass facade are unbecoming--
Irreversible--
breath, sound, and thought created this disaster--
A contest entry
- PIF Prompt Inspiration by xCandieKissesx.
600 points, ended May 29, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Critique Please! Be Ruthless! I Like It Rough!
Comments
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Very deep and profound....all the best
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Wow what an amazing write you have penned. Deep thoughts and excellent imagery! Good luck in the contest
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Beautiful write!
The description was perfect! I actually pictured the image in my mind while reading this.
Stellar job!
Good luck!
+ Jackie
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