Hate, ruling
Fear, blinding
Hidden behind rotting doors...
Bleeding, scared
Lost in your own life
Discovered behind Death's door...
Dreaming for something-
Anything
Lost in lies...
Hidden
behind
locked
doors.....
Author notes
Prompt: "Fear is the key to your life, it has locked your doors..." In Control, by Nemesea
I can usually be more creative when I have more time, but this is what just came to me. Hope it was what you were looking for.
A contest entry
- Night Quickie 10 spots by Hope Angel.
450 points, ended May 28, 6 entries
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Comments
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Looks like something out of a horror movie
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hehe this was awesome. It reminded me a little of a poem I wrote in 6th grade. But, everyone died O.o don't ask. But nice topic, very nicely trying to follow the picture, I love the format as well. Nicely done, keep on writing.
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I think that this is a well written write with an interesting topic...hmm, locked doors, huh?
Anyways, I totally agree with what you're trying to say about hate ruling and fear blinding...so true! In my opinion (just a suggestion!) I think that it would add more affect to the piece if the last part was written as:
"Hidden behind
Locked
Doors..."
A great write!
Lots of love <3,
~Faithful-Star
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I think this is great and many people can relate to it, I know I can. Thanks for enteirng
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thank...I'm fixing the background so it can be read easier...I didn't know it was going to be on the border.
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Its fine.
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