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Here One Minute, Gone The Next

Life's storms are often overwhelming,
much like the clouds of a thunderous day.
They leave us feeling alone and frightened and
like we will make the wrong decisions.
If we think, just a little, we realize
we are able to turn to God's Word and
"make a killing" against the enemy of our soul.
For he just bluffs, until God blows him away,
away like the black clouds;
here one minute,
gone the next.

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  • Samplette gold member
    May 29, 2008

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    A nice take on the picture and a well written piece of poetry. I thank you for entering my contest. Thanks.
    Sam