I have travelled all time
in your depths so blue
Oh how your deep waters
will bring me back to you
Always flowing through all time
like a never ending dream
Lost are all my thoughts of rhyme
in your never ending stream
Flow away into the blue
icy cold your waters shroud
Born again inside this dream
Like a baby I cry so loud
Depths of darkness never shallow
shall envelope my worried mind
This shell of mine is now so hollow
deep in your murk I am blind
Take me in your flow of life
beyond this land of dreams
Let me drift away in all my thoughts
where nothing is what it seems
Flow away into the blue
icy cold your waters shroud
Born again inside this dream
Like a baby I cry so loud
Author notes
http://media.putfile.com/In-this-River-58
A contest entry
- Song Inspired Poetry by Sanguinarius.
1050 points, ended June 10, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
927 points, ended February 16, 1509 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow! wonderful flow and feeling this has, it takes you right inside it , I really enjoyed this piece ~Bret~
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this will make an amazing song, as it is an amazing poem! great job and I wish you luck in the contest!
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