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Once Again Untitled

Away from denial...
Away from expectations...

I manage to comprehend.

It really isn't a lie, because it was never said.
I wrote it down on paper...
Assuming it would be read.

Its just one of those things that will maybe fix itself.

But...

I hope its not too late.
Because I will wait.
Until the end of time.

Wishing that you were mine.

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Uhhh well...

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  • Pursed Poker Lips
    May 29, 2008

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    'It really isn't a lie, because it was never said./I wrote it down on paper.../Assuming it would be read.' Those are my favorite lines. Love the rhyme scheme and the tone of the piece, very nonchalant but hurt at the same time.
    Great write.
    -BON*BON


    • Zombina
      June 6, 2008
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      Thankyou! =D

      That particular line is hard to explain. Its more of something that happened in my life...you know? && Thanks for the applause!