Your voice is what I hear
when I am alone at night
Knowing you are still in my soul
the life in my heart
Dreaming this was still real
not my created reality
Author notes
Long lost words whisper slowly to me
Still can't find what keeps me here
When all the time I've been so hollow inside
I know you're still there
Watching me, wanting me
- Haunted by Evanescence
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- 10/25/30 Quickie.... just cause.... by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 28, 2008, 9 entries
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So sad... yet beautiful.. and very fitting to the prompt, being haunted by what once was...Excellent take
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Thank you
Thank you. I think we all have our demons
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Excellent write!! I really like this. Best of luck to you.
Linda
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Thank you
Thank you so much.
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you did a great job here... i totally love evanescence thank you for sharing this and good luck in contest...!
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Thank you
Thank you so much, your words are alwasy so kind
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I can relate to this one very sweet.
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Thank you
Thank you so much. I like the fact that my inner voice is someone I care about
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Very nice interpretation... smooth flow and full of emotional content... Well done.
Ken
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Thank you
Thank you so much for your kind words
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