Words whisper in my head
As I listen to the beat
music sings my name.
You will return to me,
As I remember the night
our eyes met
…you smiled.
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Prompt
Long lost words whisper slowly to me
Still can't find what keeps me here
When all the time I've been so hollow inside
I know you're still there
Watching me, wanting me
- Haunted by Evanescence
A contest entry
- 10/25/30 Quickie.... just cause.... by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 28, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Lovely ending...special memories...
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Beautiful
As I remember the night
our eyes met
…you smiled.
I can relate to this so well. Excellent take on this prompt. Best of luck in this contest
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A soft take on the prompt, which whispers a reunion of sorts... a hoping... lovely take on the prompt
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This is beautiful
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Wonderful! I really loved the way it ended with a touch of hope!
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Wow, really nice! Fantastic write! Good luck to you
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Beautiful. If we cannot believe in the destiny of love, nor can destiny its self. Wonderfully penned. Best wishes in the comp
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nicely penned.
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Very powerful and self assured (LOL)... but a lovely take and wonderful flow... Well done.
Ken
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