Wronged so completely
Nothing left but misery
What else could you want
You’ve taken all of me
Nothing more remains
Of a you and me sadly
But haunting memories
Author notes
29 words
A contest entry
- 10/25/30 Quickie.... just cause.... by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 28, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow... aweosme short poem!!! very full of feeling~!!! You did a great job!!!
Hugs,
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Thanks beth. It was tough keeping it under 30 words!
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SAD~
haunting memories, wronged so completely...nothing left but misery...no more you and me. reaches inside and pulls the tears.a very touching read my friend...niaish for sharing with me
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So Heartfelt!!!
Ah my friend. This is much too sad. I know the feeling so well. Sometimes the wrong two people fall in love. I hope you have a nice weekend dear friend. Hugs and Smiles coming across the miles. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Love betrayed is most painful.
"Nothing more remains
Of a you and me sadly
But the haunting memories"
Pain in every word...time heals but never forgets!
your friend
darlintlc
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Wise words you speak darlantic! I agree and thanks!
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Seeping sadness surrounds this write.. a desolate feeling while being haunted... an excellent write for the lyric! Thanks
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Thanks kiwi! A very cool contest!
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww hugs...........! this is sad but lovely great write... thanks for sharing and good luck in contest...!!!!
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That is sad. Well writ.
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Very sad good write.
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Nice interpretation... smooth and lovely flow... well done.
Ken
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